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학생이 쓴 원문
If you ask me about my interest, it would be great. And because I am interested in law, movie and date with women if you ask me about it I am good. In that process I want to learn speaking English.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름] thank you for doing your Essay diligently. I will ask them some time :) keep it up.
~Teacher Aki ^^
If you ask me about my interest, it would be great. >> If you would like to know about my interest, that would be great.
And because I am interested in law, movie and date with women if you ask me about it I am good.
>> And because I am interested in law, movie and date with women, ask me anything because I am good at it.
In that process I want to learn speaking English.
>> CORRECT
OR: With that, I can learn speaking English.
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