Diary-1

I overslept this morning, so I had to take a taxi to go to the office. Usually I commute by bus, but nowadays I overslept everyday. I think it is because of a cold whether. When I came out of my house, I found that it is pretty foggy this moring. It is December 1st today but it is not too cold. After finishing my work today, I will go to the fitness center. I couldn't go there this week because I have woked overtime recently and I was so tired. Therefore I really will go tho the center. I payed about $400 for three month fee. That is more expensive than the other fitness clubs near my house. So, I have to exersice hard to get my money's worth.

Hello [이름]!Thank you for this composition. I find it so good because you did very minimal flaws. Just be cautious of the punctuation marks and choices of words. Don’t worry, with the money you paid, it would give you a lot of relief from your everyday work and worries. Just give time for yoursef to relax once in a while. So I’ll see you again tomorrow. Keep safe and enjoy the day! ^_^ T. ABBY   Diary-1 >> correct I overslept this morning, so I had to take a taxi to go to the office. >> correctUsually I commute by bus, but nowadays I overslept everyday. >> I usually commute by bus, but I oversleep nowadays. >> Usually, I take a bus but I oversleep nowadays.I think it is because of a cold whether. >> I think it is because of the cold weather. When I came out of my house, I found that it is pretty foggy this moring. >> correctIt is December 1st today but it is not too cold.>> correctAfter finishing my work today, I will go to the fitness center. >> correctI couldn't go there this week because I have woked overtime recently and I was so tired. >> I couldn’t go there for the past few days because I had worked overtime recently and I was so tired.Therefore I really will go tho the center. >> Therefore, I would really go the fitness center.I payed about $400 for three month fee. >> I payed about $400 for the three-month fee. That is more expensive than the other fitness clubs near my house. >> correctSo, I have to exersice hard to get my money's worth. >> correct