Diary 1
학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning Charry.
I hope that god bless you more.
As you know, I am trying to keep studing english for a long time.
But the chance that I can use english is limited. So, I am trying to expess evry situation that I experence in my daily life in english.
So, I would like to write short sentence that I want to translate and ask you to correct.
I am going to post up some short sentence even though entire story is not matched well.
 
The personnel appointment will be announced soon. The agency where I belong to worry about that new merged CEO use personnel appointment as the weapon that he will use.
So, The union leader said that he is considering every possibillity we can be facing.
 
For exaample, New CEO can assign the employees who against his appointment strongly the branch far away their home town.
But, unfortunately , we don't have much options that we can use.
Most employees already surmmit their first and second peferances that they wanted.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Mr. [Name]!
A pleasant morning to you too. ^^
Thank you for posting this on our composition board.
I am really pleased to know that you seize every opportunity to speak in English. I know it\'s not that easy and I truly admire you for trying and doing your best.
One day you will reap the fruits of your labor.
I honestly believe that your skills in English would play a big role on your way up the corporate ladder so hang on in there.
Patience is a virtue and in studying the English language, you will need a lot of it.
However, I can promise you that with enough patience and hard work, you will get the results that you want.
Before I go, I would like to share this quote to you: \"If you think you can, you can. If you think you can\'t, you can\'t. Either way, you are right!\"
I don\'t know who the author of that quote is but I thank him for thinking it.
I hope you\'re having a great day.
See you again on Monday. ^^
~Teacher Charry (^__^)
Good morning Charry.>> CORRECT!
OR >> A pleasant morning to you Charry.I hope that god bless you more.>> I hope that God blesses you more.As you know, I am trying to keep studing english for a long time.>> As you know, I\'ve been studying English for a long time.
But the chance that I can use english is limited.
>> But the chance that I can use English is limited.
So, I am trying to expess evry situation that I experence in my daily life in english. >> So, I am trying to express every situation that I experience in my daily life in English. So, I would like to write short sentence that I want to translate and ask you to correct.>> So, I would like to write short sentences that I want to translate and ask you to correct them for me.I am going to post up some short sentence even though entire story is not matched well.>> I am going to post up some short sentences even though the entire story does not match well. The personnel appointment will be announced soon.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> The appointment of personnel will be announced soon.
The agency where I belong to worry about that new merged CEO use personnel appointment as the weapon that he will use.>> The people in the agency where I belong to worry that the CEO of the newly merged agencies will use his power to appoint personnel as a weapon against us.So, The union leader said that he is considering every possibillity we can be facing.>> So, the union leader said that he is considering every possibility/situation we might be facing in the future. For exaample, New CEO can assign the employees who against his appointment strongly the branch far away their home town.>> For example, the new CEO can assign the employees, who are against him, to branches that are far away from their home town.But, unfortunately , we don\'t have much options that we can use.>> But unfortunately , we don\'t have much options.Most employees already surmmit their first and second peferances that they wanted.
>> Most employees already submitted their first and second peferances for assignments/departments.
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