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I have to take medicines everyday for anticancer.
These medicines have many kinds of side effects.
There are such as tiredness, drowsiness, musle pain, and obesity.
But I heard that the effects are very good.
I have to take medicines for 5 years.
It\'s bothering me to take the medicines 3 times a day but I will do for my health.
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Diary:
I have to take medicines everyday for anticancer.
CORRECT!
or>>I need to take medicines on a daily basis in order to fight cancer.
These medicines have many kinds of side effects.
These medicines have many kinds of side effects.
CORRECT!
or>>These medicines contain numerous forms of side effects.
There are such as tiredness, drowsiness, musle pain, and obesity.
There are such as tiredness, drowsiness, musle pain, and obesity.
>>These are tiredness, drowsiness, muscle pain, and obesity.
But I heard that the effects are very good.
But I heard that the effects are very good.
CORRECT!
or>>However, I have heard that the effects are actually very good on my body.
I have to take medicines for 5 years.
I have to take medicines for 5 years.
CORRECT!
or>>I must to take these medicines up to 5 years.
It\'s bothering me to take the medicines 3 times a day but I will do for my health.
It\'s bothering me to take the medicines 3 times a day but I will do for my health.
>>It\'s bothersome for me to take the medicines 3 times a day, but I will do it for my health.
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