diary
학생이 쓴 원문
today is feberary 20st and it's monday
today, i saw a newspaper
in news paper kind people helps out sleeping people .they give their clothes and they make
"give clothes to dut sleeping people" campaign. i want to help them but i am small boy
so if i give my clothes to them .they not wear my clothes because i am vry smaller them
korea give shower systhem and many kind clohes for them because they are dirty and thei clothes are dirty and smell bad . i want they have good jobs and they will spend happy time forever
thank you for reading my diary
강사 첨삭
Hello Peter,
OH! I was so touched when I read your diary. At a very young age you already want to help poor people who are in need. I hope all kids are like you. Anyway, keep on writing in our composition site. Here are my corrections my angel!
T.Sheela
today is feberary 20st and it\'s monday
>>Today is February 20 and it\'s Monday.today, i saw a newspaper
>>Today, I saw the newspaper.
>>OR Today, I read the newspaper.in news paper kind people helps out sleeping people .
>>In the news, their were many people who help other people sleep well.
they give their clothes and they make\"give clothes to dut sleeping people\" campaign.
>>They give their clothes and they make a slogan saying \" Give clothes to people who can\'t sleep\".
i want to help them but i am small boy so if i give my clothes to them .they not wear my clothes because i am vry smaller them
>> I wanted to help them but I am a young boy so If i give my clothes to them, they won\'t wear it becaue I have a small clothes.
they not wear my clothes because i am vry smaller them.
>>They can\'t wear my clothes because I am smaller than them.korea give shower systhem and many kind clohes for them because they are dirty and thei clothes are dirty and smell bad .
>>Korean give free shower and many kinds of clothes for them because they were so dirty and they smell bad.
i want they have good jobs and they will spend happy time forever >> I want them to have a good job and to have a happy life forever.thank you for reading my diary
>>Thank you for reading my diary.
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