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2012-3-23-friday
wow!!! today is friday i like friday because tomorrow is sataurday and sunday
my fever is lowerand lower i think i am more healthy than yesterday
but i have little fever
I played with my friend today i played table tennis and basketball
Every one said "[이름] hyoung is a good player" so i was happy
i learnd basket ball 1year so i have many skill
and i like tabble tennis so i play with my friends once a month
i want to play baseball with my friends
but many friends don't like baseball
but i will make my friend to like baseball ^^
happy friday ^_^
강사 첨삭
Hi Peter,
Thank you for having a time to share your diary in our composition site. I am very much happy that you are feeling much better now. I hope you will even more better this weekend. You always make me so proud of you because you\'re not just smart but you are also atheletic. See you this Monday!
T.Sheela
2012-3-23-friday>>Correct!wow!!! today is friday i like friday because tomorrow is sataurday and sunday
>>Wow!!! Today is Friday and I like Friday\'s because the next day will be Saturday and Sunday.my fever is lowerand lower i think i am more healthy than yesterday
>> My fever lowerd down and I think i am more healthy than yesterday.but i have little fever
>But I still have fever.I played with my friend today i played table tennis and basketball
>>I playes with my friends today. I played table tennis and basketball.Every one said \"[이름] hyoung is a good player\" so i was happy
>> Everyone said ,\" [이름] hyoung is a good player\", so I was happy.i learnd basket ball 1year so i have many skill
>> I learned how to play basketball one year ago, so I have many skills.and i like tabble tennis so i play with my friends once a month
>>And I also like tablle tennis so I play it with my friends once a month.i want to play baseball with my friends but many friends don\'t like baseball
>>I want to play baseball with my friends but many of my friends don\'t like baseball.but many friends don\'t like baseball ^^>> But many of my friends don\'t like baseballhappy friday ^_^
>>Correct!
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