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2012-04-17 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

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i forgot my table tennis racket i was very sad i asked to teacher but she doesn't know my table tennis racket i haven't my table tennis racket so i'm very boring in school Today i rent to my best friend so i played in school with my friend's racket But in my home i'm very boring i think that my racket is special for me i want find it ㅠㅠ

강사 첨삭

Hi Peter, Wow! despite having a busy schedule you still had time to send your diary to me. I feel bad that you didn\'t find your Table Tennis racket.Let\'s hope that the one who found it will use it in a good way. See you tomorrow! T.Sheela i forgot my table tennis racket >> Correct! (Always start your sentence with capital letter and end it with a period.)i was very sad >>Correct!( Capitalize the First letter.)i asked to teacher but she doesn\'t know my table tennis racket >>I asked my teacher but she doesn\'t know what my table tennis racket looks like.i haven\'t my table tennis racket so i\'m very boring in school >>I haven\'t seen my table tennis racket so, I was very bored at School.Today i rent to my best friend so i played in school with my friend\'s racket >> Today, I barrowed my best friends racket that\'s why I played tennis at school using my best friend racket.But in my home i\'m very boring >> But in my house, I am bored.i think that my racket is special for me >> I think my racket is special to me.i want find it ㅠㅠ >>Correct! ( Capitalize the first letter and put a period at the end of the sentence.)

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