diary
학생이 쓴 원문
i forgot my table tennis racket
i was very sad
i asked to teacher but she doesn't know my table tennis racket
i haven't my table tennis racket so i'm very boring in school
Today i rent to my best friend so i played in school with my friend's racket
But in my home i'm very boring
i think that my racket is special for me
i want find it ㅠㅠ
강사 첨삭
Hi Peter,
Wow! despite having a busy schedule you still had time to send your diary to me. I feel bad that you didn\'t find your Table Tennis racket.Let\'s hope that the one who found it will use it in a good way. See you tomorrow!
T.Sheela
i forgot my table tennis racket
>> Correct! (Always start your sentence with capital letter and end it with a period.)i was very sad
>>Correct!( Capitalize the First letter.)i asked to teacher but she doesn\'t know my table tennis racket
>>I asked my teacher but she doesn\'t know what my table tennis racket looks like.i haven\'t my table tennis racket so i\'m very boring in school
>>I haven\'t seen my table tennis racket so, I was very bored at School.Today i rent to my best friend so i played in school with my friend\'s racket
>> Today, I barrowed my best friends racket that\'s why I played tennis at school using my best friend racket.But in my home i\'m very boring
>> But in my house, I am bored.i think that my racket is special for me
>> I think my racket is special to me.i want find it ㅠㅠ
>>Correct! ( Capitalize the first letter and put a period at the end of the sentence.)
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