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학생이 쓴 원문
On Tuesday April 4th
Today I bought clothes. four black T-shirts and one gray T-shrit. and then I back home I started YouTube excercise. It was so hard but I felt very good. Dinner also very yummy.
I finished my arcademey homework and another homework . I felt today was very nice day.
강사 첨삭
Hey Mary! Great job on buying new clothes and exercising! Finishing your homework is awesome. Keep up the good work!
~T. Jenna
Today I bought clothes.
>>Today, I bought clothes.
OR
>>Today, I went shopping and purchased some new clothes for myself.
four black T-shirts and one gray T-shrit.
>>I got four black t-shirts and one gray t-shirt.
and then I back home I started YouTube excercise.
>>After shopping, I went back home and started a YouTube workout/exercise.
It was so hard, but I felt very good.
Correct, or
>>It was challenging, but I felt really good afterward.
Dinner also very yummy.
>>After working out, I had my dinner which was very yummy/delicious/delectable.
I finished my arcademey homework and another homework .
>> Right after my dinner, I finished my academy homework and another assignment.
I felt today was very nice day.
>>I felt that today was a very nice day.
OR
>>I felt that today was an exceptionally pleasant day.
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