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2018-04-02 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

36 yrs old age now, it's quite sad that I am still concerned which way I should take for my career. I've worked as a flight attendant about 8 years ago, and when I decide to quit the job, I thought family is more important than anything like traveling abroad or how people look at me with one of the most preferred job as a girl. I didn't like the fact that I could hardly take part in family gatherings or friends' weddings or important parties with them. So it seemed like I wanted so much to stay in Korea with my family and friends and got another job which is totally different from my previous career. And now, I realize the simple truth that I cannot have everything in one place. There's always a cost you have to pay to get another. Now, I can easily see my friends and family but it cost the valuable advantages I used to have with my job before. For example, the cheap air fare for myself and family, long annual leaves which I don't have as much as I used to have and the environmen...

강사 첨삭

Hi there Min!(\",)

I think your message was cut so the last sentence wasn\'t complete. You are right! We cannot have everything in life no matter how much we try to achieve everything. The only thing we could to is to way our options then choose what you think is the best for you. Don\'t you think so?

36 yrs old age now, it\'s quite sad that I am still concerned which way I should take for my career.

>> I\'m 36 years old now, it\'s quite sad that I am still concerned which way should I take for my career.
 I\'ve worked as a flight attendant about 8 years ago, and when I decide to quit the job, I thought family is more important than anything like traveling abroad or how people look at me with one of the most preferred job as a girl.

>> I\'ve worked as a flight attendant about 8 years ago, and when I had decided to quit the job, I thought family is more important than anything like traveling abroad or how people look at me with one of the most preferred job as a girl.
 I didn\'t like the fact that I could hardly take part in family gatherings or friends\' weddings or important parties with them. 

>> correct!
 So it seemed like I wanted so much to stay in Korea with my family and friends and got another job which is totally different from my previous career. 

>> correct!
 And now, I realize the simple truth that I cannot have everything in one place. There\'s always a cost you have to pay to get another.

>> correct! 
 Now, I can easily see my friends and family but it cost the valuable advantages I used to have with my job before. 

>> correct!
 For example, the cheap air fare for myself and family, long annual leaves which I don\'t have as much as I used to have and the environment...

>> to be continued....

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