Diary 180615
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Kim Eojun's Dasboeida!
I visited the talk show studio yesterday after work.
It's called 'das boeida' hosted by DJ Kim Eojun.
I've watched this show for a long time on Youtube or radio since a few years ago, probably when the ferry Sewol disaster.
This DJ opened up my eyes to view our political situations logically and rationally.
Usually, political news and political talk shows are quite boring so it's not easy to get interested in them but this DJ is very fun and there's something attractive about him that people get interested in politic.
I attach the photo of the DJ. He's not hansome at all! but he has good looking in my point of view. hahahahah I've told my friends that my ideal man is this guy, they were laughing so hard. haha. but it's true.
Since I knew about his talk show and his thoughts, he got so much attractive to me.
Anyway, I think I'm going to watch the show again next month. I have to lie I'm sick so that I can leave office earlier. :)
강사 첨삭
Hey there Min!
I think you are attracted to his intelligence and eloquence. Many women find that very attractive in a guy aside from humor. I do too. But these guys are very hard to find. Enjoy it (or should I say him?) while you can.
~T. Lynn
I visited the talk show studio yesterday after work.
>> correct!
It\'s called \'Das Boeida\' hosted by DJ Kim Eojun.
>> correct!
I\'ve watched this show for a long time on Youtube or radio since a few years ago, probably when the ferry Sewol disaster.
>> I\'ve watched this show for a long time on YouTube and listened to him on his radio show since a few years ago, probably since the Sewol Ferry disaster.
This DJ opened up my eyes to view our political situations logically and rationally.
>> correct!
Usually, political news and political talk shows are quite boring so it\'s not easy to get interested in them but this DJ is very fun and there\'s something attractive about him that people get interested in politics.
>> correct!
I attach the photo of the DJ. He\'s not hansome at all! but he has good looking in my point of view. hahahahah
>> I attach the photo of the DJ. He\'s not handsome at all! but he is good looking in my point of view.
I\'ve told my friends that my ideal man is this guy, they were laughing so hard. haha. but it\'s true.
>> correct!
Since I knew about his talk show and his thoughts, he got so much attractive to me.
>> Since I knew about his talk show and his thoughts, I found him so attractive.
Anyway, I think I\'m going to watch the show again next month.
>> correct!
I have to lie I\'m sick so that I can leave office earlier. :)
>> I have to lie that I\'m sick again so I can leave the office earlier.
I think you are attracted to his intelligence and eloquence. Many women find that very attractive in a guy aside from humor. I do too. But these guys are very hard to find. Enjoy it (or should I say him?) while you can.
~T. Lynn
I visited the talk show studio yesterday after work.
>> correct!
It\'s called \'Das Boeida\' hosted by DJ Kim Eojun.
>> correct!
I\'ve watched this show for a long time on Youtube or radio since a few years ago, probably when the ferry Sewol disaster.
>> I\'ve watched this show for a long time on YouTube and listened to him on his radio show since a few years ago, probably since the Sewol Ferry disaster.
This DJ opened up my eyes to view our political situations logically and rationally.
>> correct!
Usually, political news and political talk shows are quite boring so it\'s not easy to get interested in them but this DJ is very fun and there\'s something attractive about him that people get interested in politics.
>> correct!
I attach the photo of the DJ. He\'s not hansome at all! but he has good looking in my point of view. hahahahah
>> I attach the photo of the DJ. He\'s not handsome at all! but he is good looking in my point of view.
I\'ve told my friends that my ideal man is this guy, they were laughing so hard. haha. but it\'s true.
>> correct!
Since I knew about his talk show and his thoughts, he got so much attractive to me.
>> Since I knew about his talk show and his thoughts, I found him so attractive.
Anyway, I think I\'m going to watch the show again next month.
>> correct!
I have to lie I\'m sick so that I can leave office earlier. :)
>> I have to lie that I\'m sick again so I can leave the office earlier.
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