Diary
학생이 쓴 원문
Today(well, on monday) I thought that My English conversation became comfortable.
I was really sad when I realized that I'd forgotten a lot of English speaking skills since I came to Korea last year. I regret about I didn't practice English right after I came back home.
I'm not still fluent or perfect but I'm so comfortable.
Thank you Cam, my dear teacher!
It's because you are really friendly so make me confident.
About part 5, Well let's say that imaginaion is a matter with it.
I've never used credit card so I don't know possible errors that can happen when using one. I just listend to about hackers of those company's sites or criminals who steal and use it. To be honest, I had to read the answer sheet and make use of it for my imagination.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon! What a sweet, sweet person you really are. Of course I will be very glad to help you as always if given the chance.
I\'ll see you in class again tomorrow baby!
~xoxoTeacher Cam~
Here are my corrections:
Today(well, on monday) I thought that My English conversation became comfortable.
>>correctI was really sad when I realized that I\'d forgotten a lot of English speaking skills since I came to Korea last year.
>>correct
I regret about I didn\'t practice English right after I came back home.
>>correct
>>I regret that I didn\'t practice English right after I came back home.I\'m not still fluent or perfect but I\'m so comfortable.
>>correctThank you Cam, my dear teacher!>>correctIt\'s because you are really friendly so make me confident.
>>Its because you are really friendly so that made me confident.About part 5, Well let\'s say that imaginaion is a matter with it.
>>correctI\'ve never used credit card so I don\'t know possible errors that can happen when using one.
>>correct
I just listend to about hackers of those company\'s sites or criminals who steal and use it.
>>correct
To be honest, I had to read the answer sheet and make use of it for my imagination. >>correct
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