Diary 2

2016-06-20 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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So, there was no gap that I enter. But I don't want to disappoint this personnel appointment. I am sure that God always give me the best thing. And there must be something that I can not understand. I thing that he is a kind of the navigation. Although I entered a wrong way, He will guide me the best way soon like a navigation. I believe that he will give me another best way or there is the important thing here that I have to do.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Mr. [Name]! ^^ How\'s your Monday going so far. Thank you for sharing about this. I could imagine how disappointed you were when you learned about the news the first time. However, it\'s also good to know that you were able to reflect about God\'s perfect timing and didn\'t linger too long on that disappointment. God\'s timing is always perfect. We may not always understand his ways but we have to understand that he is a powerful God and he won\'t let anything bad happen to you or your loved ones. You\'re that important to him. If he\'s asking you to put something down, it is because he wants you to pick up something better. If he\'s asking you to give something up, it is because he wants you to be free of obligations when the best opportunity comes along. It\'s a matter of perspective and I always like to think that God moves in mysterious ways. You may be ready for the great opportunity at hand but there\'s a very big chance that the people and the circumstances that would work on your behalf are not yet ready and laid out well for you. Another reason is that, you may not be ready just yet. I think that\'s the reason why you have to wait. Before I say goodbye, I would like to share to you two of my favorite verses: Jeremiah 29:11 >> \"For I know the plans I have for you,\" declares the Lord, \"plans to prosper you and not to harm you; plans to give you hope and a future.\" Zechariah 13:9 >> \"I will bring that group through the fire and make them pure. I will refine them like silver and purify them like gold. They will call on my name, and I will answer them. I will say, \'These are my people\', and they will say, \'The Lord is our God\'.\" Always remember that God\'s timing is perfect. He is, at the moment, refining you and purifying you. Trust him. I hope you are having a great day. I\'ll see you again tomorrow. ^^ ~Teacher Charry So, there was no gap that I enter. >>  [DO YOU MEAN]: So, there\'s no opportunity for me to enter at the moment. But I don\'t want to disappoint this personnel appointment. >> But I don\'t want to be disappointed in this personnel appointment.I am sure that God always give me the best thing. >> I am sure that God will always give me the best thing. And there must be something that I can not understand.>> And there must be something that I cannot understand.I thing that he is a kind of the navigation. >> I think that he is a kind of a navigation. OR >> I think that he is like a navigation. Although I entered a wrong way, He will guide me the best way soon like a navigation. >> Although I entered the wrong way, he will guide me to the best way soon like a navigation would. I believe that he will give me another best way or there is the important thing here that I have to do. >> I believe that he will give me the best way or there is still an important thing here that I have to do.

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