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2010-08-25 · 첨삭 강사 michaelA

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I begun to look complemental asistance to study English from yesterday. I remind a friend of my fiance said Phone-english is good to give a tryand they are very helpful. I was intriged if they can give me good lessons and advices. I serched Internet and it was really quick to open every browser. I was admired the speed because in Australia, I couldn't use the such the speed. That is another story anyway...... I could meet Power English,try sample lessons and see what they like First It seemed to suit to me and I requested pre test to see how it is going. I never used phone-calling programs before. I receieved test calls twice in this morning. They were all friendly and I loved it! I registed straightaway and now I can't wait untill my first beginning lesson opening tommorow

강사 첨삭

Thanks a lot, [이름], for such a nice compliment  for Power English. Well I hope we could meet your expectations, don't worry, we will do everything we can to help you in your studies in English. Take care al ways and see you in class! =)   I begun to look complemental asistance to study English from yesterday. >>> I began to look for complimentary assistance on how to study English from yesterday. I remind a friend of my fiance said Phone-english is good to give a tryand they are very helpful. >>> I remember a friend of my fianc?who said that Phone English is good to give a try, and that it is very helpful.  I was intriged if they can give me good lessons and advices. >>> I was intrigued if they could give me good lessons and pieces of advice.  I serched Internet and it was really quick to open every browser. >>> I searched over the internet and it was really quick to open every browser. I was admired the speed because in Australia, I couldn't use the such the speed. >>> I admired the speed because in Australia, I couldn't use such  speed. That is another story anyway...... >>> CorrectI could meet Power English,try sample lessons and see what they like >>> I was able to see Power English, so I tried the sample lessons and saw what they are like.First It seemed to suit to me and I requested pre test to see how it is going. >>> First It seemed to suit to me and I requested for a pre test to see how it was going. I never used phone-calling programs before. >>> CorrectI receieved test calls twice in this morning. >>> I received the test calls twice this morning. They were all friendly and I loved it!>>> CorrectI registed straightaway and now I can't wait untill my first beginning lesson opening tomorrow. >>> I registered straight away and now I can't wait until my first lesson which will begin tomorrow.  

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