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2013-02-15 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I am a housewife so I manage the family economy As the result of checking the last month's economy, we spend a lot of money including fixed expenses like insurance fee, maintance fee, living fee. I should be more economical from now. After March, I am out of job. The price of living is getting higher but the salary is not increasing. That's a big problem to live for me. Frankly speaking, I don't want to live luxury but I want to have money enough to live in my family. I have many things to do in my life. I want to volunteer to take care of the poor. I donate thirty dollars every month to another country through automatic banking system. By the way, I have a few hours left to get an anoucement of downsizing from my company. I am so nervous, I can't stand it if the compensatin is not good enough. I will fight with the company by suing. I have been working for the company almost for 7 years. I did my best & contributed many jobs at work. The company should be responsible for me

강사 첨삭

Hello there MARIA! Well, you really should fight for your rights.Working in a company that long entitles you of benefits.You can consult your labor department if ever.Thank you for this homework.Let\'s talk more about this in class.I\'ll see you in class!Take Care! -T. Nina I am a housewife so I manage the family economy.>>> I am a housewife so I manage my family\'s finances. As the result of checking the last month\'s economy, we spend a lot of moneyincluding fixed expenses like insurance fee, maintance fee, living fee. >>> After checking last month\'s expenditures, we spent a lot of money mainly on fixed expenses like insurance fee, maintenance fee, and cost of living fee. I should be more economical from now on. >>> Correct After March, I am out of job. >>> After March, I will be out of my job.The price of living is getting higher but the salary is not increasing. >>> The cost of living is getting higher but the salary is not increasing.That\'s a big problem to live for me. >>> Correct Frankly speaking, I don\'t want to liveluxury but I want to have money enough to live in my family. >>> Frankly speaking, I don\'t want to live a luxurious life but I want to have enough money to spend for my family.I have many things to do in my life. >>> There are many things that I wanted to do in my life. I want to volunteer to take care of the poor. >>> CorrectI donate thirty dollars every month to another country through automatic banking system.>>> Correct By the way, I have a few hours left to get an anoucement of downsizing from my company. >>> By the way, I have a few hours left before hearing an announcement that my company is downsizing. I am so nervous, I can\'t stand it if the compensatin is not good enough. >>> I am so nervous. I can\'t stand if the compensation will not be good enough.I will fight with the company by suing. >>> I will fight for my right by suing the company. I have been working for the company almost for 7 years. >>> I have been working in the company for almost seven years. I did my best & contributed many jobs at work. >>> Correct >>> I did my best and contributed so many helpful tasks to the company.The company should be responsible for me. >>> Correct >>> The company should be responsible of providing me well.

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