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2010-09-14 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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I got a job on Saturday. I have to make subtitles of online lecture for the hearing-impaired. Subject is Math, Science, Korean and subjects of social science. Pay to make subtitles of math and science is higher than to make subtitles of others. I was assigned three math and three Korean. Making subtitle of math is difficult because math is composed operator like limit. Video playtime is forty five minutes. Usually pay of math is 20000 won and pay of Korean is 15000won. The time to make subtitles is four hours for math and three hours for Korean. I felt terrible yesterday because professor insult at me in class. Actually that's not insult as depending on person. He asked my family, background and he tried to find fault of period of growth of mind.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], I’m sorry to hear on what your professor did to you. What I can say is just take it positively. Build confidence and be more active and class. In that way, he will never think that something is wrong with your upbringing. See you tomorrow, Connie I got a job on Saturday. >> I got a job every Saturday. I have to make subtitles of online lecture for the hearing-impaired. >> I have to make subtitles for online lectures being used by the deaf. Subject is Math, Science, Korean and subjects of social science. >> The subjects are Math, Science, Korean and social sciences. Pay to make subtitles of math and science is higher than to make subtitles of others. >> The payment for subtitles of Math and Science is higher than the others.  I was assigned three math and three Korean. >> I was assigned to make three for Math and three for Korea. Making subtitle of math is difficult because math is composed operator like limit. >> Making subtitles for Math is difficult because Math is composed of operator with limits. Video playtime is forty five minutes. >> Correct Usually pay of math is 20000 won and pay of Korean is 15000won. >> Usually, the payment for Math 20,000 won and for Korean is 15,000 won. The time to make subtitles is four hours for math and three hours for Korean.>>  CorrectI felt terrible yesterday because professor insult at me in class. >> I felt terrible yesterday because my professor insulted me in class. Actually that's not insult as depending on person. >> Actually, it’s not an insult maybe it just depends on the person. He asked my family, background and he tried to find fault of period of growth of mind. >> He asked about my family background and he tried to find fault for the period of my growth and development.

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