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Today, I slept up to 12pm. I was a little bit lazy day. I didn’t watch disney movie today. So I’ll wantch in monday.
Tomorrow I’m going to part time jobㅠㅠ
I don’t want to go there, but I should go. Because I need money.
Befor I go to part time job, I’ll cut my hair. So I will wake up at 11am
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Hello Lina!
Good job for today! You have to follow your schedule for tomorrow. Keep on writing! ^^
~T. Maine
>>Correct.
>>OR: Today, I slept until noon.
I was a little bit lazy day.
>>I was a little bit lazy today.
>>OR: It was a bit lazy day for me.
I didn’t watch disney movie today.
>>I didn\'t watch any Disney movies today.
So I’ll wantch in monday.
>>So I\'ll watch one on Monday.
Tomorrow I’m going to part time jobㅠㅠ
>>Tomorrow, I\'m going to do my part-time job.
>>Tomorrow, I\'m going to do my part-time job.
I don’t want to go there, but I should go. Because I need money.
>> I don\'t want to go there, but I should go because I need some money.
Befor I go to part time job, I’ll cut my hair.
>>Before I go to my job, I\'ll have my hair cut.
So I will wake up at 11am
>>So I will wake up at 11 a.m.
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