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I went to the art musium that exhibits Chagall's art pieces last saturday.It was the first time to go to art musium in Korea while I have been to some famous museums in other countries like Louvre. Chagall is called Magician of color because his artwoks were painted with beautiful color combinations. Chagall's artworks are about love, bible, circus and his hometown, farm in Russia. Horses, cows and cocks are often appear as main theme in lots of paintings of him. That's because Chagall had been born and has grown up in a farm village. Especially the pictures of him and his wife were the most impressive. I love his pieces and I bought some postcards his artworks are on.

Hi [이름]! Good job today! You made a very good composition again. Thank you for sharing me about the art works of Chagall. Moreover, you have very minimal flaws in your writing. Just check the capitalization of words as well as the sentence patterns. Enjoy writing and learn more expressions. Thank you and see you tomorrow! Enjoy the day ahead! ^_^ T. Abby Diary-3 >> correct I went to the art musium that exhibits Chagall's art pieces last saturday. >> correct (remember to capitalize the words “Saturday”) It was the first time to go to art musium in Korea while I have been to some famous museums in other countries like Louvre. >> It was my first time to go to an art museum in Korea though I’ve been to some famous museums in other countries already, such as in Louvre.Chagall is called Magician of color because his artwoks were painted with beautiful color combinations. >> Chagall is called as a Magician of color because his art works were painted with beautiful color combinations. Chagall's artworks are about love, bible, circus and his hometown, farm in Russia. >> correct Horses, cows and cocks are often appear as main theme in lots of paintings of him. >> Horses, cows and cocks often appear as the main theme of his paintings. That's because Chagall had been born and has grown up in a farm village. >> correct Especially the pictures of him and his wife were the most impressive. >> Especially his pictures and his wife’s are the most impressive. >> Especially the pictures of his wife and his are the most impressive. I love his pieces and I bought some postcards his artworks are on. >> I love his pieces and I even bought some postcards of  his art works.