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Title:Go to the Libary I went to the libary with my friends.In the libary, there are many peoples in there.But there are not many books on bookshlef.The books are new.My friends read a conmic book and I read a masterpiece.The title of the book is Robinson Crusoe.It's content is robinson Crusoe are on the ship but windstorm are make ships broke and all people who on the ship are dead.Fortunately, Robinso Crusoe survive.He lived in desert island.It was a little interesting.

Hi [이름]!   Thank you for creating another wonderful composition about your experience going to the Library. I must say that you really had a great time there with your friends. I hope that you will continue reading books about adventure and other topics that will help you improve your reading skills. Your interest and willingness to go to the Library will lead you to your dream of becoming an expert to the English Language. I really appreaciate your cooperation.   Have a nice day ahead!   Good job!     --Teacher Kris     Title:Go to the Libary >> Visit to the Library >> OR: Having Fun in the LibraryI went to the libary with my friends. >> Correct. >> OR: Me and my friends went to the Library. In the libary, there are many peoples in there.>> There are many people in the Library. But there are not many books on bookshlef. >> There were fewer books on the bookshelves than I expected. >> OR: Only few books were placed on the bookshelves during that time. The books are new. >> Correct. >> OR: Most of the books are brand new. My friends read a conmic book and I read a masterpiece. >> My friends choose to read comic books while I choose reading masterpiece books. >> OR: I read about masterpiece books while my friends read about comic books. The title of the book is Robinson Crusoe. >> Correct. >> OR: Robinson Crusoe is the title of the book. It\'s content is robinson Crusoe are on the ship but windstorm are make ships broke and all people who on the ship are dead.>> The book Robinson Crusoe is about a ship that got hit by a windstorm and all the people inside it  died except for the main cast who is Robinson Crusoe. Fortunately, Robinso Crusoe survive. >> Fortunately, Robinson Crusoe survived. >> OR: Robinson Crusoe is the only survivor. He lived in desert island. >> Correct. >> OR: He lived in the desert island after surviving the tragedy in the ocean. It was a little interesting. >> It was somewhat interesting. >> OR: It was quite interesting.