Diary 4

Last Saturday my friend and I went to the ice rink. I skated for four hours.My friend and I had a race many times.I hurt my foot and arms.But skating is fun.After we went ice rink,we went the Lotte Mart.It was too boring.My friend and I could not buy any snacks.We didn't have energy and we were so hungry.Mom and I came home late.

A pleasant evening to you [이름]!   Thank you for sending your composition today! You\'ve done a great work for your composition today. Most of them are correct! Anyway, here is a quote that I\'ve got from the website to encourage you more. \"Learn everything you can, anytime you can, from anyone you can; there will always come a time when you will be grateful you did.\" (http://www.verybestquotes.com/14-inspirational-quotes-for-english-learners/) -Teacher Kris   Last Saturday my friend and I went to the ice rink. >> CORRECT OR: >> My friend and I went to the ice skating rink last Saturday. I skated for four hours. >> CORRECT OR: >> I glided for four hours. My friend and I had a race many times. >> My friend and I raced with each other many times. OR: >> We raced with each other several times. I hurt my foot and arms. >> I hurt my feet and arms. OR: >> My feet and arms are painful. But skating is fun. >> CORRECT OR: >> But skating is enjoyable. After we went ice rink,we went the Lotte Mart. >> After going to the ice rink, we went to the Lotte Mart. It was too boring. >> CORRECT OR: >> It was too uninteresting. My friend and I could not buy any snacks. >> CORRECT We didn\'t have energy and we were so hungry. >> CORRECT OR: >> We were very tired and hungry. Mom and I came home late. >> CORRECT OR >> Mom and I reached home late.