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Hi there again Su Jin I bet you are really busy for the beginning of this term, but it’s nice to know that give time in seeing the exhibition of Picasso and other artists. Have fun there! See you!
Teacher Verna =)
I used my new printer and desktop.
>>> Correct
That's so good.
>>> Correct
My computer was so old version.
>>> My computer was so old.
But now I have a new one.
>>> Correct
So I can do my homework and web surfing quickly.
>>> So I can do my homework and do web surfing quickly.
I'm looking forward to begin the lectures.
>>> Correct
My lectures are begin on Mar. 2.
>>> My lectures will begin on March 2.
I'll be very busy.
>>> Correct
I like that. Learning is so interesting.
>>> Correct
I plan to go to exhibition named Picasso and Modern art with my best friend the next few days.
>>> I plan to go to an exhibition by Picasso and other Modern artists with my best friend the next few days.
I have lots of things to do. Preparing for beginning the term.
>>> I have lots of things to do especially for preparing for beginning the term.
So I get to go.
>>> So I got to go.
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