Diary

Tomorrow I'm going to see a movie with one of my college friends. She said to me she got 2 free movie tickets, so she wanted to have dinner with me and then go to see a movie together. Hanging around with her will be helpful to release my stress. I hope to gain new energy to afford the heavy schedule of this semester. Now it's time to sleep and have a good dream. I gotta go to make a bed. Good night.

Hello my dear! Thanks again for this. You really can write well. Anyway, I hope that you will enjoy the movie. By the way, what mvie is it? Have fun with your friend.

Take good care!

Diary

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Tomorrow I'm going to see a movie with one of my college friends.

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>>I will be watching a movie with one of my college friends tomorrow.

She said to me she got 2 free movie tickets, so she wanted to have dinner with me and then go to see a movie together.

>>She told me she has 2 free movie tickets,so she wanted to have dinner with me and then go see  the movie.

 Hanging around with her will be helpful to release my stress.

>>correct

 I hope to gain new energy to afford the heavy schedule of this semester. 
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Now it's time to sleep and have a good dream.

>>Correct

 I gotta go to make a bed.

>>I뭭e got to go and make the bed.

 Good night.

>>Good night