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Our vacation is almost finish. We had a long vacation.But when I go to school it would be buiser than vacation. But class is sometimes fun. I can play games with my friends and talk about sports with my friends. I think math is more difficult and difficult.I don't like school's food except meat.

Hi [이름]!   Good evening! kkkk It\'s good to hear that you are having fun when you play with your friends at school. What kind of sports do you usually talk about? kkkkk Expect that you\'ll be busier once you attend school again so prepare yourself. kkk I can also see that you are already putting a space after the punctuation mark, period. However, there were still some sentences that you forgot to put a space. But generally, you\'re great! Keep up the good job! ~~T.Kris~~   Our vacation is almost finish. >> Our vacation is almost finished. [You just forgot to use the past tense of the word FINISH] We had a long vacation. >> CORRECT! But when I go to school it would be buiser than vacation. >> But when I go to school, it would be busier than vacation. [Just the punctuation mark, comma] :) But class is sometimes fun. >> CORRECT! I can play games with my friends and talk about sports with my friends. >> BETTER: I can play games with my friends and talk about sports with them. OR: >> I can play games, and talk about sports with my friends. I think math is more difficult and difficult. >> I think, Math is becoming harder. OR: >> I think, Math is becoming more difficult. I don\'t like school\'s food except meat. >> CORRECT! OR: >> I don\'t like any of the school\'s food but meat.