Diary
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Title: insect
Insect is very dirty.My house has ant.If I push ants it doesn't die. So, my parents and I use tape.Ants can't move when we using tape. There are many ants in my house.So, we can't put food on the table or floor.I think ant is dirty. I don't want to live with ants. I want to kill every ants in my house because they are ugly.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
haha.. I was laughing when I was reading your essay. Why do you hate ants that much?
Anyway, you are right! They are bothersome. They are considered as pests but not all ants are pests.
There are some ants that are helpful. They are the ants who eat the dirts on the walls of a house.
But if the ants in your house bother you so much, better kill them.
Anyway, [이름], thank you so much for the essay. I will see you in our class.
Have a great day ahead.
~~ Teacher Kris
Title: insect
>>Title: InsectInsect is very dirty.
>> Insects are very dirty.My house has ant.
>> There are ants in my house. If I push ants it doesn\'t die.
>> If I push the ants, they do not die.So, my parents and I use tape.
>> So, my parents and I use tapes.Ants can\'t move when we using tape.
>> So, the ants cannot move.There are many ants in my house.
>> CorrectSo, we can\'t put food on the table or floor.
>> So, we can\'t put foods on the table or on the floor.I think ant is dirty.
>> I thnk ants are dirty.I don\'t want to live with ants.
>> I don\'t want to live with the ants.I want to kill every ants in my house because they are ugly.
>> Correct
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