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Wow, thanks giving day is coming soon. My friend invited me to his house ! I will eat the dinner with his family on thanks giving day . but I am afraid what I talk about …
And I was supposed to take a class at 9am but then I slept in, so I was late in my class.
And I got new my bag today . I bought a bag on the internet from ebay that is very popular online shop in the U.S.A.
Sometime I spend a much time using the cell phone so that I can’t complete my daily plan. I want to keep it away from me. I would like to find out to throw away it when I concentrate.
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Thank you for sending in a composition [이름]! You\'re so lucky! You can experience the American Thanksgiving firsthand. Good luck and enjoy!
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Wow, thanks giving day is coming soon.
>> Wow! Thanksgiving Day is coming soon.
My friend invited me to his house !
>> CORRECT!
I will eat the dinner with his family on thanks giving day .
>> I will eat dinner with his family on Thanksgiving Day.
but I am afraid what I talk about …
>> But I\'m afraid I don\'t know what to talk about.And I was supposed to take a class at 9am but then I slept in, so I was late in my class.
>> CORRECT!
>> forAnd I got new my bag today .
>> CORRECT!
I bought a bag on the internet from ebay that is very popular online shop in the U.S.A.
>> I bought a bag on eBay, which is a very popular online shop in the U.S.A.
Sometime I spend a much time using the cell phone so that I can’t complete my daily plan.
>> Sometimes I spend too much time using my cellphone so I can\'t finish my daily tasks.
I want to keep it away from me.
>> CORRECT!
I would like to find out to throw away it when I concentrate.
>> I want to throw it away so that I can concentrate.
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