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2015-11-25 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Wow, thanks giving day is coming soon. My friend invited me to his house ! I will eat the dinner with his family on thanks giving day . but I am afraid what I talk about … And I was supposed to take a class at 9am but then I slept in, so I was late in my class. And I got new my bag today . I bought a bag on the internet from ebay that is very popular online shop in the U.S.A. Sometime I spend a much time using the cell phone so that I can’t complete my daily plan. I want to keep it away from me. I would like to find out to throw away it when I concentrate.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for sending in a composition [이름]! You\'re so lucky! You can experience the American Thanksgiving firsthand. Good luck and enjoy! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Wow, thanks giving day is coming soon. >> Wow! Thanksgiving Day is coming soon. My friend invited me to his house ! >> CORRECT! I will eat the dinner with his family on thanks giving day . >> I will eat dinner with his family on Thanksgiving Day. but I am afraid what I talk about … >> But I\'m afraid I don\'t know what to talk about.And I was supposed to take a class at 9am but then I slept in, so I was late in my class. >> CORRECT! >> forAnd I got new my bag today . >> CORRECT! I bought a bag on the internet from ebay that is very popular online shop in the U.S.A. >> I bought a bag on eBay, which is a very popular online shop in the U.S.A. Sometime I spend a much time using the cell phone so that I can’t complete my daily plan. >> Sometimes I spend too much time using my cellphone so I can\'t finish my daily tasks. I want to keep it away from me. >> CORRECT! I would like to find out to throw away it when I concentrate. >> I want to throw it away so that I can concentrate.  

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