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2016-05-31 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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He said that today is the solemnity of the most holy body and blood of christ. Fr. Michael who charge in the community that I belong to went to a picnic with Korean language class member. So, substitute priest came and hold the english mass instead of him He asked me to translate what he is saying suddenly during the mass. He said that he lived in Brazil for a while, so he can understand the life in abroad. He said that he received a lot of encouragement through the communion when he was in Brazil and he hopes that everybody here receives the same encouragement and the power from the holy communion. During giving the sacrament, He said that Today is special day. So I would like to let you join the holy sacrament. Please come up to the altar and watch and join the holy sacrament. People who were there hesitated for a while. But he continue to urging people to come up to the altar, people started coming near the altar and join the holy sacrament.

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He said that today is the solemnity of the most holy body and blood of christ. >> He said that today is the solemnity of the most holy body and blood of Christ. Fr. Michael who charge in the community that I belong to went to a picnic with Korean language class member. >> Fr. Michael who is in charge of the community that I belong to went to a picnic with a student in a Korean language class. So, substitute priest came and hold the english mass instead of him >> So, a substitute priest came and presided over the English mass instead of him.He asked me to translate what he is saying suddenly during the mass. >> During the mass, he suddenly asked me to translate what he was saying. He said that he lived in Brazil for a while, so he can understand the life in abroad. >> He said that he lived in Brazil for a while, so he can understand the life abroad. He said that he received a lot of encouragement through the communion when he was in Brazil and he hopes that everybody here receives the same encouragement and the power from the holy communion. >> He said that he received a lot of encouragement through the communion when he was in Brazil and he hopes that everybody here receives the same encouragement and power from the holy communion.During giving the sacrament, He said that Today is special day. >> During the giving of the sacrament, he said that today is a special day. So I would like to let you join the holy sacrament. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: He said: \"I would like to let you join the holy sacrament.\" Please come up to the altar and watch and join the holy sacrament. >> \"Please come up to the altar to watch and join the holy sacrament.\" People who were there hesitated for a while. >> CORRECT! OR >> The churchgoers hesitated for an instant. But he continue to urging people to come up to the altar, people started coming near the altar and join the holy sacrament. >> But he continued urging the people to come up to the altar, so the people started coming near the altar and joined the holy sacrament.

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