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I have a good person who my professor connect to me.
Aug 23 2016
I went to the school to see my professor who is on the super position because I need to get his signature that I need for stopping a study temporally. But he had just said that I would have made a report which says what I am going to do during 1 year off from a college. I made it without an huge consideration and then I handed it to him. The minute that he got through my report showing the plan, he called somebody. When he reached somebody, he refed to 2 things, one of which was about a class and other of which was about me. He mentioned that he has a student who aware and the student was me. He wanted me to introduce his friend. His friend helps me and can give me some direction. What I am saying is that I got a good person. My professor makes a connection to me who doesn’t know well about his direction. I have no word to express how much I lucked today.
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Hi, [이름]! ^^
How\'s your day going so far?
Thank you very much for writing in our composition board and sharing something about your day.
I think your professor is really kind to introduce you to someone who can help you out.
Having a good direction in life is really important.
The sad thing about it is that many of us are clueless about it.
Having someone to guide you from now on would definitely bring you to a clearer and better direction.
I hope everything works out well for you. ^^
See you again later.
Take care always.
~Teacher Charry ^^
I have a good person who my professor connect to me.>> [DO YOU MEAN]: There\'s a good person my professor introduced to me. Aug 23 2016>> August 23, 2016I went to the school to see my professor who is on the super position because I need to get his signature that I need for stopping a study temporally.
>> I went to school to see my professor who is in a superior position. I need to get his signature because I temporarily stopped studying.
But he had just said that I would have made a report which says what I am going to do during 1 year off from a college.
>> [DO YOU MEAN]: But he just said that I would have to make a report which summarizes the things that I did while I was one year off from college.
I made it without an huge consideration and then I handed it to him.
>> I made it without a huge consideration and then I handed it to him.
The minute that he got through my report showing the plan, he called somebody.
>> The minute that he got through my report, he called somebody.
OR >> The minute that he was done going over my report, he called someone.
When he reached somebody, he refed to 2 things, one of which was about a class and other of which was about me.
>> When he reached that person, he started talking about two things. One of which was about a class and the other one was about me.
He mentioned that he has a student who aware and the student was me.
>> [DO YOU MEAN]: He mentioned that I was there.
He wanted me to introduce his friend.
>> He wanted to introduce me to his friend.
His friend helps me and can give me some direction.
>> His friend can help me and can give me some direction.
What I am saying is that I got a good person.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> What I am saying is that I met a good person.
My professor makes a connection to me who doesn’t know well about his direction.
>> [DO YOU MEAN]: My professor made some contacts for me because he knows that I don\'t have a good direction at this moment.
I have no word to express how much I lucked today.
>> I cannot express how lucky I am today.
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