Diary-7
학생이 쓴 원문
Abby,
long time no see.
I'm sorry for not answering for your calling.
Thesedays, I have been very busy.
I have been to jeju, my hometown.
And I have a lot of things to do at the company.
Moreover, I have some year-end dinner engagements and get-togethers
with friends and co-workers.
At the meetings, I drank alcohol and the next day I couldn't get up early.
I have no engagements from now on in 2010.
See you tomorrow moring!
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
It’s been long time since we had our last class. I was so worried of you. Good to know that you’re okay and was just busy. Anyway, I’ll talk to you tomorrow. If you have some spare time today, please read our book in advance for better discussion tomorrow. Thank you and take care! Enjoy the rest of the day! “,)
T. Abby
Diary-7
>> correct
Abby,
>> correct
>> Hi Abby!>> Dear [Name],long time no see.
>> correct
>> It’s long time no see.I'm sorry for not answering for your calling.
>> I’m sorry for not answering your calls.
>> I’m sorry that I couldn’t answer your calls.
>> I’m sorry of not answering your calls.
>> I’m sorry of not being able to answer your calls.Thesedays, I have been very busy.
>> I have been very busy these days.
>> These days, I’ve been very busy.I have been to jeju, my hometown.
>> I have been to my hometown in Jeju.
>> I went to Jeju, my hometown.And I have a lot of things to do at the company.
>> And I do a lot of things in the company.Moreover, I have some year-end dinner engagements and get-togethers with friends and co-workers.
>> Moreover, I also have some year-end dinner appointments and get-togethers to attend with my friends and coworkers.At the meetings, I drank alcohol and the next day I couldn't get up early.
>> In our meetings, I drank alcohol and couldn’t get up early anymore the next day.I have no engagements from now on in 2010.
>> I have no appointments from now until the year ends.See you tomorrow moring!>> See you tomorrow morning!
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