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2017-03-29 · 첨삭 강사 Jacey

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1. Today,I took the mock test related to the company which I want to get into. 2. But this mock test which includes mathematical section and reasoning problem was very difficult to me because this is my first test , so I failed my test. 3. There are old saying "Well begun is well begun is half done", I have made my debut with less preparation but It carry an important meaning in terms of prepare for getting a job. 4. College middle term exam is less than two weeks away. 5. The weather has not been very good here the last couple of days and I have had many essays to finish and the contents of classes, which has reduced the amount of my time available to me.

강사 첨삭

Hello there, [이름]! :)

Thanks for sharing something about your day.


I\'m sorry to hear about your test, but it\'s good that you\'re taking things positively.

Use this as your motivation to strive harder. :)


Have a good night, [이름].  :)


Happily,

---Teacher JACEY ^_^)/



1. Today,I took the mock test related to the company which I want to get into.
>> Today, I took the mock test related to the company which I want to get in.

>> OR : I took a mock test today similar to the test being administered by the company I want to get in.


 2. But this mock test which includes mathematical section and reasoning problem was very difficult to me because this is my first test , so I failed my test.
>> But this mock test included mathematical sections and reasoning problems that were very difficult for me. it was my first time to take this type of test, so I failed.

>> OR : I found the mathematical sections and reasoning problems included in the mock test very difficult. It was my first time to encounter these things so, I failed.


 3. There are old saying \"Well begun is well begun is half done\", I have made my debut with less preparation but It carry an important meaning in terms of prepare for getting a job.
>> There is an old saying that goes \"well begun is half done,\". I have made my debut with less preparations but it carries an important meaning when it comes to preparing for a job.


 4. College middle term exam is less than two weeks away.
>> Our college midterm exam is less than two weeks away.


 5. The weather has not been very good here the last couple of days and I have had many essays to finish and the contents of classes, which has reduced the amount of my time available to me.

>> The weather has not been very good here since the last couple of days. I still have many essays to finish and I have to review for my classes. These things have taken my available time.

>> OR  : The weather has not been very good here since the last couple of days. Because of the many essays that I have to do and the classes I have to review, I only have little time for myself.

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