Diary

Hello, [이름]! :)

How\'s your Friday evening?

I hope you are having a good one.

I know you have a lot of exams but please do find time to rest. :)

I am looking forward to hearing from you on Monday.

Take care and have a wonderful weekend!

Happily,

Teacher JACEY ^_^)/

1.I\'m supposed to start swim this week,and that help my body act more normally.
>> I\'m supposed to start swimming this week to help my body become more active.

>> OR : I\'m supposed to start swimming this week to help my body become healthier.

2. Yesterday I parsed out that people\'s brain exists in order to move and act so people should do some exercise at least 3 times a week.
>> Yesterday, I parsed out that people\'s brain exists in order to move and act so people should do some exercise at least 3 times a week.

3. After I read this article, I realized the reasons for existence of brain and why people should act and do exercise.

>> After I read this article, I realized the reason for the existence of our brain and why people should exercise.

 4. When I can\'t focus on study, I often exercise on the horizontal bar which is installed in the door frame of dormitory in order to stimulate my brain.
>> When I cant focus on my studies, I often exercise on the horizontal bar which is installed in the door frame of the dormitory in order to stimulate my brain.

5. I have a plan to celebrate president Park\'s imprisonment with roommate on the eve of the weekend because the imprisonment was a great new for our country and liberal democracy.
>> I have plans to celebrate President Park\'s imprisonment with my roommate this weekend because this is such a great news for our country.

6. But people who are in their 50\'s or older hate this news so somtimes I speak carefully about this news.

>> But people who are in their 50\'s or older hate this news, so I try to speak carefully about this.