diary
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
Well, you did good.
Keep it up.
Have a nice day!
_Teacher Dianne
suddenly/quietly/loudly/well/ beautifully/carefully
1. Alex carefully put up the bookshelves. It was too difficult for me to do on my own.
>> correct
2. Every thing happened so suddenly. We had to move to California in less than a month.
>> correct
3. Why does he always have to talk so loudly. You can hear him in the next room!
>> correct
4. Although she speaks five languages, she did not do well on the translation exam.
>> correct
5. I was so surprised. His new apartment was beautifully decorated.
>> correct
Im not finished , im writing my diary in the evening.
>> I\'m not finished writing my diary yet. I\'m writing it in the evening.
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