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I spent the whole day with my daughter today. My daughter was supposed to go to a new daycare center from tomorrow but the date moved to next monday because of COVID-19. So she has to stay at home all this week that I also took my annual leave all this week to take care of her.
We went to an ecoligical park near my house to see dinosaur models in an indoor museum in the park this morning. But the indoor museum was temporarily closed because of COVID-19. Fortunately, the outdoor park opened and there were few people. We walked in the park and my daughter seemed to be in a good mood because she’s been at home for a while.
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Hi again Ms. [이름]!
Thanks for sharing your thoughts Ms. [이름].
I guess your daughter enjoyed the view and the walk.
Enjoy the rest of the day^^
I spent the whole day with my daughter today.
>>CORRECT!OR: I spent the whole day with my daughter.
My daughter was supposed to go to a new daycare center from tomorrow but the date moved to next monday because of COVID-19.
>>My daughter was supposed to go to a new daycare center from tomorrow, but due to COVID-19 the date was moved next Monday.
So she has to stay at home all this week that I also took my annual leave all this week to take care of her.
>>So she has to stay home all week. I\'ve been taking annual leave all week to take care of her, too.
We went to an ecoligical park near my house to see dinosaur models in an indoor museum in the park this morning.
>>We went to an ecological park near our house this morning to see dinosaur models at an indoor museum in the park.
But the indoor museum was temporarily closed because of COVID-19.
>>CORRECT!
Fortunately, the outdoor park opened and there were few people.
>>Fortunately, the outdoor park opened and a few people were there.
We walked in the park and my daughter seemed to be in a good mood because she’s been at home for a while.
>>My daughter has been at home for a while and she seemed to be in a good mood because we went for a walk.
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