Diary-July,9th,Mon.

hello, teacher! I wrote my diary. Please read and correct it. I arrived Seoul from Daejeon at today's afternoon. I met the captain of my boxing center, when I wandered GS convinence market. Why I'm thinking of acter '안내상' whenever I see the captain? It's really funny! hahaha! The earliest, in six months, The latest, in two years, I will adopt a baby dog. It's a one of the my life goals! I decided to acchieve the goals! As a only one life for me, It's right to try to do my best for what I really want to do. Because I don't know when I will die. And It's not a kind of guilty to adopt a dog. I will get it! But,the matter is 'where is the room for growin the dog'. It will be hard thing that finding a room for growing dogs. I wonder if you understand what I'm saying, clearly. ^_^ I will write the last part of my diary, tomorrow. Thank you for your careful reading. See you!

Hi there! It's my pleasure to teach you in your composition. I am very willing to do all the means just to help you improve your English skills. Thank you for sharing me your diary. You would have not improved without your efforts, too, of course. By the way, I have indicated some corrections below for your further improvement. I hope it'll help. Take care! T. Jane Here are my corrections for you: hello, teacher! >>Hello, Teacher! I wrote my diary. >> CorrectPlease read and correct it.>> CorrectI arrived Seoul from Daejeon at today\'s afternoon. >>I arrived Seoul from Daejeon this afternoon. I met the captain of my boxing center, when I wandered GS convinence market. >> I met the captain of my boxing center when I wandered at GS Convenience Market. >> When I wondered at GS Convenience Market I met the captain of my boxing center.Why I\'m thinking of acter \'안내상\' whenever I see the captain? >> Why is it that I am thinking of actor \'안내상\' whenever I see the Captain? It\'s really funny! >> Correct hahaha!>> Hahaha!The earliest, in six months, The latest, in two years,I will adopt a baby dog. >> Within six months to two years, I will adopt a puppy.It\'s a one of the my life goals! >> It\'s one of my life\'s goals. >> OR... It is one of my goals in life.I decided to acchieve the goals! >> I have decided to achieve my goals.As a only one life for me, It\'s right to try to do my best for what I really want to do. >>I have only one life, It\'s just right to try doing best for what I really want to do. Because I don\'t know when I will die. >> Because I do not know when will I die.And It\'s not a kind of guilty to adopt a dog. >> And it doesn\'t make you guilty to adopt a dog.I will get it! >> CorrectBut,the matter is \'where is the room for growin the dog\'. >> But the matter is, What room am I going to choose for tending the dog?It will be hard thing that finding a room for growing dogs.>> It will be difficult to find a room for tending dogs.I wonder if you understand what I\'m saying, clearly.^_^ >> I wonder if you clearly understand what I am saying.^_^ I will write the last part of my diary, tomorrow. >> I will write the last part of my diary tomorrow.Thank you for your careful reading. >> Thank you for reading it carefully. See you! >> I will see you later!