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...and came back a few hours ago, ( I didn\'t join the tour this time.) first thing she texted me as soon as they came back was \"I\'m going to leave. I can\'t stay.\".
If I were her, I would have left earlier, becuz I\'m a person who cannot keep looking at my ex-boyfriend dating with his new girl friend in my boundary. So I fully understand her feeling and why she cannot put up with this situation no matter who dumped who between them. (Actually she told him to break up.) Both of them are good friends not only for me also for all of our club members . I need to keep trying to hold her to stick to here, but I don\'t know how. I should have been with them during the tour of this month. now I so much regret that I gave up going with them. I had a sprain in my wrist during water-ski the day before the tour so I was not able to operate the clutch. But I regret that I didn\'t try to go by public transportation like express bus. Then maybe she wouldn\'t have had such a feeling. maybe.
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..and came back a few hours ago, ( I didn\'t join the tour this time.) first thing she texted me as soon as they came back was \"I\'m going to leave. I can\'t stay.\".
>> I didn\'t join the tour this time. But few hours ago, the first thing she texted me as soon as they came back was, \"I\'m going to leave. I can\'t stay.\"
If I were her, I would have left earlier, becuz I\'m a person who cannot keep looking at my ex-boyfriend dating with his new girl friend in my boundary.
>>If I were her, I would have left earlier because I\'m a person who doesn\'t keep looking at my ex-boyfriend dating with his new girl friend in my boundary.
So I fully understand her feeling and why she cannot put up with this situation no matter who dumped who between them.
>>So I fully understand her feeling and why she cannot put up with this situation no matter who dumped between them.
(Actually she told him to break up.) Both of them are good friends not only for me also for all of our club members .
>>Actually she told him to break up. Both of them are good friends not only for me but also for all of our club members.
I need to keep trying to hold her to stick to here, but I don\'t know how.
>>I need to keep trying to hold her to stick here, but I don\'t know how.
I should have been with them during the tour of this month. now I so much regret that I gave up going with them.
>>I should have been with them during the tour of this month. Now, I fully regret that I gave up going with them.
I had a sprain in my wrist during water-ski the day before the tour so I was not able to operate the clutch. But I regret that I didn\'t try to go by public transportation like express bus.
>>Correct!
Then maybe she wouldn\'t have had such a feeling. maybe.
>>Then maybe she wouldn\'t have had such a feeling. Maybe.
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