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2019-08-19 · 첨삭 강사 Joylin

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I don\'t know what to do now. One of my friends (female) says she\'s going to leave our motorcycle club soon. She\'s been out with a guy who\'s also a member of the club. They\'ve seen each other for about two years and broke up 5 months ago. As soon as they broke up, it seemed like any one of them was going to leave the club, but then they both stay without any big trouble assumingly , we thought it was such a relief that we don\'t have to love any of them from our club. Because both of them are good person, and we have known both for a long time. But recently thing\'s happened. We had some of new female members, and the guy\'s been dating with one of the girls. It\'s nothing we would blame him or her. They broke up long time ago, and having a new girl friend is nothing to be criticized. But the thing is that we have a group tour every month riding bike and stay the night at the place and had fun like barbeque and bear, things like that. Yesterday the club had a regular monthly tour and..

강사 첨삭

Hi there!
Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
Here are my corrections.
One of my friends (female) says she\'s going to leave our motorcycle club soon.
>>One of my female friends says she\'s going to leave our motorcycle club soon.
She\'s been out with a guy who\'s also a member of the club. They\'ve seen each other for about two years and broke up 5 months ago. 
>>She\'s been going out with a guy who\'s also a member of the club. They\'ve seen each other for about two years and broke up 5 months ago. 
As soon as they broke up, it seemed like any one of them was going to leave the club, but then they both stay without any big trouble assumingly , we thought it was such a relief that we don\'t have to love any of them from our club. Because both of them are good person, and we have known both for a long time.
>>As soon as they broke up, it seemed like any one of them was going to leave the club, but then they both stayed assuming that there\'s no big trouble. We thought it was such a relief that we don\'t have to take side sides because both of them are good person and we have known both for a long time.

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