Diary190826
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I want to write about what I did for last weekends.
I met some of my friends from our bike club in the downtown, had beer and chicken together. We, Korean usually jump from here to there couple of times through the night for drinking, but last Friday, we just stayed one place from 8 pm to 2 am in one place, it\'s very very unusual for us to stick in one place. Probably it\'s because there were a lot of things to talk about among us, so it means it was good.
And the next day I felt I needed a full day to rest , stayed at home , watching movies from internet all day long. I watched three movies. The greatest one among them was \' Green book\' . It\'s very beautiful story which I\'d like to recommend to everyone. It\'s based on a true story about two men. A working-class Italian-American bouncer becomes the driver of an African-American classical pianist on a tour of venues throughout the 1960s American South. You are going to smile throughout the movie while they make jokes........
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Hi there!
Here are my corrections.
I met some of my friends from our bike club in the downtown, had beer and chicken together.
>>I met some of my friends from our bike club in the downtown and we had beer and chicken together.
We, Korean usually jump from here to there couple of times through the night for drinking, but last Friday, we just stayed one place from 8 pm to 2 am in one place, it\'s very very unusual for us to stick in one place.
>>We, Koreans usually jump from here to there couple of times through the night for drinking, but last Friday, we just stayed in one place from 8 pm to 2 am and it\'s very unusual for us to stick just in a place.
Probably it\'s because there were a lot of things to talk about among us, so it means it was good.
>>Probably, it\'s because there were a lot of things to talk about among us, so it means it was good.
And the next day I felt I needed a full day to rest , stayed at home , watching movies from internet all day long. I watched three movies.
>>And the next day, I felt I needed a full day to rest, stayed at home, watched movies in the internet all day long. I watched three movies.
The greatest one among them was \' Green book\' . It\'s very beautiful story which I\'d like to recommend to everyone.
>>The greatest one among them was \' Green book\'. It\'s a very beautiful story that I\'d like to recommend to everyone.
It\'s based on a true story about two men. A working-class Italian-American bouncer becomes the driver of an African-American classical pianist on a tour of venues throughout the 1960s American South. You are going to smile throughout the movie while they make jokes.
>>Correct!
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