Diary190830
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I tried to turn on the bike engine last weekend and found the battery lost its power. damn... I should have used bike time to time at least, but it was too hot to ride motorbike during the summer. I think I left the bike too carelessly. So I tried to ignite the battery from the portable power jump starter but I didn\'t make it. I struggled to jump on the power couple of times, but eventually decided to bring the battery to one of my friend who has the battery charger. I took it off and ask him to re-charge it, then brought it back tomorrow. It\'s my task for today. It was really hard to open the rider\'s seat off my bike and even harder to take out the battery. But it\'s going to be much more difficult to put it back to the original place. Because it\'s really tiny space with bundles of cable, ties and everything. So I\'m quite worried whether I could make it or not. Just in case if I cannot put it back correctly, I need to call SOS to my friends. sigh. Good maintenance is very important.
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Hi there!
Here are my corrections.
I tried to turn on the bike engine last weekend and found the battery lost its power. damn... I should have used bike time to time at least, but it was too hot to ride motorbike during the summer.
>>I tried to turn on the bike engine last weekend and found the battery lost its power. Damn! I should have used the bike from time to time at least, but it was too hot to ride motorbike during the summer.
I think I left the bike too carelessly. So I tried to ignite the battery from the portable power jump starter but I didn\'t make it.
>>I think I left the bike too carelessly. So, I tried to ignite the battery from the portable power jump starter, but I didn\'t make it.
I struggled to jump on the power couple of times, but eventually decided to bring the battery to one of my friend who has the battery charger. I took it off and ask him to re-charge it, then brought it back tomorrow.
>>I struggled to jump on the power couple of times, but eventually decided to bring the battery to one of my friends who has the battery charger. I took it off and ask him to re-charge it, then brought it back tomorrow.
It\'s my task for today. It was really hard to open the rider\'s seat off my bike and even harder to take out the battery.
>>Correct!
But it\'s going to be much more difficult to put it back to the original place. Because it\'s really tiny space with bundles of cable, ties and everything.
>>Correct!
So I\'m quite worried whether I could make it or not. Just in case if I cannot put it back correctly, I need to call SOS to my friends. sigh. Good maintenance is very important.
>>So I\'m quite worried whether I could make it or not. Just in case if I cannot put it back correctly, I need to call SOS with my friends (Sigh). Good maintenance is very important.
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