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2016-05-31 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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But he continue to urging people to come up to the altar, people started coming near the altar and join the holy sacrament. When the time we received the host, He asked me to translate something. Unfortunately, The Korean expression he used was vary difficult to translate. He wanted to say that I would like to let everyone here to get holy body and holy blood at the same time. When I gave you the host. You may eat the host after soaking in the holy blood. There is a Korean simple expression to describe this process in one word. After the mass, I asked my foreign friend wether there is a word expressing that process. He said “I have not heard about that”

강사 첨삭

Hello, Mr. [Name]! ^^ How\'s your day going so far? I could imagine how difficult it must be for you to translate your native language to English from time to time at church. You are often caught off-guard and I think you are really brave to do it for them even if you feel really nervous. The primary reason why it\'s difficult to translate is because some words or phrases in our native language don\'t have an equivalent translation in English. Fortunately, the practice that you did during the eucharistic celebration in the mass has a translation in English. It\'s called intinction. It is the act of steeping the bread/host in thewine in order to enable the communicant to receive the two elements conjointly. It is part of the Latin rite in the Roman Catholic church and is commonly practiced in countries influenced by the Latin culture such Brazil, Spain, Italy, and Portuguese. Anyhow, I hope I was able to help you. ^^ I also hope you\'re having a great day. I\'ll see you again tomorrow. ~Teacher Charry ^^ But he continue to urging people to come up to the altar, people started coming near the altar and join the holy sacrament. >> But he continued urging the people to come up to the altar, so the people started coming near the altar and joined the holy sacrament. When the time we received the host, He asked me to translate something. >> When the time for us to receive the host has come, he asked me to translate something. Unfortunately, The Korean expression he used was vary difficult to translate. >> Unfortunately, The Korean expression he used was vey difficult to translate.He wanted to say that I would like to let everyone here to get holy body and holy blood at the same time. >> He wanted to say that he would like to let everyone go near to receive the holy body and holy blood at the same time.When I gave you the host. You may eat the host after soaking in the holy blood. >> \"When I give you the host, you may eat it only after soaking it in the holy blood.There is a Korean simple expression to describe this process in one word.>> There is a simple Korean expression to describe this process. After the mass, I asked my foreign friend wether there is a word expressing that process. >> After the mass, I asked my foreign friend whether there is a word that could be used to express that process.He said “I have not heard about that” >> He said “I have not heard about that.\"

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