Diary20230517(part1)
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My boss just suddenly talked about having dinner together with our new staff, her step daughter, so we went to sushi restaurant all together. I was a little reluctant to it but we are going to have get-together someday soon in order to get to know each other better. So I thought it\'s better to face the difficulties as early as possible. I try not to drink soju too much, so I can be sober and not make any mistake such as being too nice and friendly and make her any wrong idea about me, like I\'m an easy person or something. haha. I told my boyfriend about this plan(?) before the dining, and he said it\'s going to be okay if I don\'t smile or laugh too often. That\'s exactly what I did. so I think I did very well. Being nice but not too much. And There\'s something I realize that it was subtle different when my boss was treating her. For example, sometimes anyone of our company should physically visit some delivery office to pick up our parcels. (this delivery company offers really fast expr
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Hi there, Min. Thank you for the update on your work environment. It beats my work environment.lol I think you are handling it pretty well. Good job! ^^ Also, good job with the diary entry. I appreciate checking homework once in a while.lol Have a good one. See you tomorrow for our class. ~Jane
My boss just suddenly talked about having dinner together with our new staff, her step daughter, so we went to sushi restaurant all together.
>> My boss just suddenly talked about having dinner together with our new staff, her stepdaughter, so we went to a sushi restaurant all together.
I was a little reluctant to it but we are going to have get-together someday soon in order to get to know each other better.
>> I was a little reluctant to do it but we are going to have a get-together someday soon in order to get to know each other better.
So I thought it\'s better to face the difficulties as early as possible.
>> CORRECT =)
I try not to drink soju too much, so I can be sober and not make any mistake such as being too nice and friendly and make her any wrong idea about me, like I\'m an easy person or something. haha.
>> I try not to drink soju too much, so I can be sober and not make any mistakes such as being too nice and friendly and giver her any wrong idea about me like I\'m an easy person or something. haha.
I told my boyfriend about this plan(?) before the dining, and he said it\'s going to be okay if I don\'t smile or laugh too often.
>> I told my boyfriend about this plan before the dinner, and he said it\'s going to be okay if I don\'t smile or laugh too often.
That\'s exactly what I did. so I think I did very well.
>> That\'s exactly what I did so I think I did very well.
Being nice but not too much.
>> CORRECT =)
And There\'s something I realize that it was subtle different when my boss was treating her.
>> And I realized something about how my boss was treating her differently and subtly.
For example, sometimes anyone of our company should physically visit some delivery office to pick up our parcels.
>> For example, sometimes anyone from our company should physically visit some delivery office to pick up our parcels.
(this delivery company offers really fast express service but receiver have to visit the nearby office to pick it up. )
>> (This delivery company offers really fast express service but the receiver has to visit the nearby office to pick it up. )
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