Diary20230517(part2)
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really fast express service but receiver have to visit the nearby office to pick it up. )
Before her daughter(actually step daughter) started to work, I was the one who sometimes visit that office, and it takes about 5-10 minutes on foot and plus(There is always many people waiting for their parcel, sometimes it takes longer. ) Yesterday on the dining table, my boss brought an idea about buying a bicycle with a small cargo box, so it makes the hassle a little easier. Why now he suddenly talks about a bicycle? It\'s because the new staff is going to be the one who needs to do the chores from now! And one more. Yesterday, there was one of factory owners who provides mechanical parts to our company joining the dinner with us. His factory is nearby , so we usually visit the factory to communicate about the parts and pick them up. He has a small scooter bike, and my boss suddenly ask him to help her to pick up any kind of parcels from the delivery office when it\'s too heavy for her! OMG.
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Before her daughter(actually step daughter) started to work, I was the one who sometimes visit that office, and it takes about 5-10 minutes on foot and plus(There is always many people waiting for their parcel, sometimes it takes longer. )
>> Before her daughter (actually stepdaughter) started to work, I was the one who sometimes visits that office, and it takes about 5-10 minutes on foot plus there are always many people waiting for their parcel, and sometimes it takes longer.
Yesterday on the dining table, my boss brought an idea about buying a bicycle with a small cargo box, so it makes the hassle a little easier.
>> Yesterday over dinner, my boss brought up an idea about buying a bicycle with a small cargo box, so it makes the hassle a little easier.
Why now he suddenly talks about a bicycle?
>> Why is he now suddenly talking about a bicycle?
It\'s because the new staff is going to be the one who needs to do the chores from now!
>> It\'s because the new staff is going to be the one who needs to do the chores from now on!
And one more.
>> And one more thing.
Yesterday, there was one of factory owners who provides mechanical parts to our company joining the dinner with us.
>> Yesterday, there was one of the factory owners who provide mechanical parts to our company joined us for dinner.
His factory is nearby , so we usually visit the factory to communicate about the parts and pick them up.
>> His factory is nearby, so we usually visit the factory to communicate about the parts and also to pick them up.
He has a small scooter bike, and my boss suddenly ask him to help her to pick up any kind of parcels from the delivery office when it\'s too heavy for her! OMG.
>> He has a small scooter bike, and my boss suddenly asks him to help her to pick up any kind of parcel from the delivery office when it\'s too heavy for her! OMG.
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