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This weeknd is our country National Liberation Day.My country was liberated from Japanese colonial rule in 1945. This year is70th National Liberation Day. So, my country thought it is a very special day.Near Baekje toms there are many Korean flags. And we can see a Korean flag behind the bus and Lotte World in my town. My country try to liberated from Japan but USA drop a bomb in the Japan city. So, Japan surrendered and my country was liberted.

A happy Friday to you, [이름]!   Happy National Liberation Day! Thank you for sending your composition today! I\'m just wondering, how do the people in Korea celebrate the Liberation Day? kkkk.. How about you? How do you plan to celebrate it? I\'m sure you are going to meet some of your friends. kkkk For your composition today, watch out for the spelling of some words, I think you just overlooked some of the words so be careful next time. Happy weekend! kkkk -Teacher Kris   This weeknd is our country National Liberation Day. >> This weekend is our country\'s National Liberation Day. My country was liberated from Japanese colonial rule in 1945. >> CORRECT OR: >> My country was liberated from Japan\'s colonial rule in 1945. This year is70th National Liberation Day. >> This year is our country\'s 70th National Liberation Day.   So, my country thought it is a very special day. >> So my country thought that is a very special day. Near Baekje toms there are many Korean flags. >> DO YOU MEAN: There are many Korean flags near Baekje\'s tomb. OR: >> There are many Korean flags near Baekje\'s sculpture. And we can see a Korean flag behind the bus and Lotte World in my town. >> And we can see a Korean flag behind each busses and the Lotte World in my town.  My country try to liberated from Japan but USA drop a bomb in the Japan city. >> My country tried to liberate from Japan but USA dropped a bomb in Japan.  So, Japan surrendered and my country was liberted. >> So Japan surrendered and my country was liberated from their colonial rule.