did I tell you the story about RED2?

2013-08-08 · 첨삭 강사 Giselle

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1) _How many_ stars are in the sky? 2) _How many people live on islands? 3) _How many_ birds are there? 4) _How much_ water is in the ocean? 5) _How much money is in a bank? 6) __How many_ countries are in the world? Absolutely, I have to do many things, but I think every workers needs the rest. So, I went to movie theater where I watched movie with my girl friend. Byung-hun Lee, who is the famous actor in Korea, whose movie is released. As a Korean, We felt some kind of patriotism to chose it. We took a ticket for discounted price. and I used the card points that had filed up last week. As a result, I got a two ticket for quarter price!!! I was very happy. and we really enjoyed movie. The story of the movie is that retired man who have worked for secret agency get in trouble. because Government judged them very dangerous. They decided them as killing muchine. This is the reson why the title of movie is named R.E.D It means The capital of Retired Extream Dangerous.

강사 첨삭

Hi there again!^_________^

Thank you for sharing the movie to me. I appreciate it!^^

Well, anyway, that\'s right.

All employees really need to have some break at times since they are hardworkers, right?^^

I have  a few corrections for you with your sentences.

Just check it out for me!^^

See you!^^

~t. Nina~

1) _How many_ stars are in the sky?

>>Correct!
2) _How many people live on islands?

>>Correct!
3) _How many_ birds are there?

>>Correct!
4) _How much_ water is in the ocean?

>>Correct!
5) _How much money is in a bank?

>>Correct!
6) __How many_ countries are in the world?
>>Correct!
Absolutely, I have to do many things,
but I think every workers needs the rest.

>>Absolutely, I have to do a lot of things but I really think workers too need some rest.
So, I went to movie theater where I watched movie with my girl friend.

>>So I went to a movie theater where I watched a movie with my girl friend.

>>Or>>So I went out with my girlfriend to watch a movie.
Byung-hun Lee, who is the famous actor in Korea, whose movie is released.

>>Byung-hun Lee, who is a famous actor in Korea, starred in the movie.
As a Korean, We felt some kind of patriotism to chose it.

>>As a Korean, I felt the need to watch that movie.
We took a ticket for discounted price.

>>We got the ticket at a discounted price.
and I used the card points that had filed up last week.

>>Correct!
As a result, I got a two ticket for quarter price!!!

>>As a result, I got two tickets for a quarter of its regular price!^^
I was very happy. and we really enjoyed movie.
>>I was very happy and we really enjoyed watching the movie.
The story of the movie is that retired man who have worked for secret agency
get in trouble.

>>The story is about a retired man who worked as a secret agent and eventually got into trouble.

because Government judged them very dangerous.

>>Because the government accused them of doing something bad.
They decided them as killing muchine.

>>They decided to become killing machines.
This is the reson why the title of movie is named R.E.D

>>This is why the title of the movie is R.E.D.^^
It means The capital of Retired Extream Dangerous.

>>It stands for \"Retired and Extremely Dangerous\".^^

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