did I tell you the story about RED2?
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there again!^_________^
Thank you for sharing the movie to me. I appreciate it!^^
Well, anyway, that\'s right.
All employees really need to have some break at times since they are hardworkers, right?^^
I have a few corrections for you with your sentences.
Just check it out for me!^^
See you!^^
~t. Nina~
1) _How many_ stars are in the sky?
>>Correct!
2) _How many people live on islands?
>>Correct!
3) _How many_ birds are there?
>>Correct!
4) _How much_ water is in the ocean?
>>Correct!
5) _How much money is in a bank?
>>Correct!
6) __How many_ countries are in the world?
>>Correct!
Absolutely, I have to do many things,
but I think every workers needs the rest.
>>Absolutely, I have to do a lot of things but I really think workers too need some rest.
So, I went to movie theater where I watched movie with my girl friend.
>>So I went to a movie theater where I watched a movie with my girl friend.
>>Or>>So I went out with my girlfriend to watch a movie.
Byung-hun Lee, who is the famous actor in Korea, whose movie is released.
>>Byung-hun Lee, who is a famous actor in Korea, starred in the movie.
As a Korean, We felt some kind of patriotism to chose it.
>>As a Korean, I felt the need to watch that movie.
We took a ticket for discounted price.
>>We got the ticket at a discounted price.
and I used the card points that had filed up last week.
>>Correct!
As a result, I got a two ticket for quarter price!!!
>>As a result, I got two tickets for a quarter of its regular price!^^
I was very happy. and we really enjoyed movie.
>>I was very happy and we really enjoyed watching the movie.
The story of the movie is that retired man who have worked for secret agency
get in trouble.
>>The story is about a retired man who worked as a secret agent and eventually got into trouble.
because Government judged them very dangerous.
>>Because the government accused them of doing something bad.
They decided them as killing muchine.
>>They decided to become killing machines.
This is the reson why the title of movie is named R.E.D
>>This is why the title of the movie is R.E.D.^^
It means The capital of Retired Extream Dangerous.
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