Did you believe in Santa Claus when you were a child?

Hi Sir! Thank you for completing your homework. I enjoyed reading it. I am glad to know that children in Korea are excited to receive gifts. It is really special to receive a gift and share the moment with our families. Anyway, look below on some of the corrections I made for you. You did a good job on your composition. Keep it up!~~T. Dee

I don\'t remember when I realized that Santa Claus was not a real.

>>I don\'t remember when I realized that Santa Claus was not real.

However, I pretended that I believed Santa would come my home.

>>However, I still pretended to believe that Santa would come to our house.

If I didn\'t, I thought my parents would not purchase a gift for me.

>>If I didn\'t, I thought that my parents would not purchase a gift for me anymore.

I have two children, they are 7 years old and 4 years old.

>>Now, I already have two children, they are aged 7 and 4 years old.

I guess that my son already know that Santa is not a real person, because he wanted me to order a gift through online shopping mall and I did it according to his desire.

>>I guess that my son already knows that Santa is not real because he wanted me to order a gift for him online and I actually did it according to his desire.

The nursery teacher asked parents to prepare child\'s present at home from next year, because they explained that Santa will come to child\'s house from next year. 

>>The nursery teachers asked the parents to prepare presents for the children at home starting next year because they told the children that Santa will visit them at home next year.
Anyway, The Christmas is not a traditional holiday in Korea, but we always are looking forward to seeing Santa Claus.

>>Anyway, Christmas is not a traditional holiday in Korea but we always are looking forward to seeing Santa Claus.