Did you believe in Santa Claus when you were a child?
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I had not beilived in Santa claus ,but once, I got my favorite dollar in Christmas when I was 7years old. I really wanted to get it, As soonas i got it. i believed Santa at only that age .
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T. James
I had not beilived in Santa claus ,but once, I got my favorite dollar in Christmas when I was 7years old.
>>> I had not believed in Santa Claus, but once, I got my favorite toy at Christmas when I was 7 years old.
I really wanted to get it, As soonas i got it.
>>> I really wanted to get it, as soon as I got it.
i believed Santa at only that age .
>>> I believed Santa at only that age.
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