Did you believe in Santa Claus when you were a child? How about now?
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I didn\'t believe in Santa Claus. Actually I didn\'t know exsist of Santa Claus.
I just saw in a book like so I know him of the fantasy.
And my father didn\'t disguise as Santa. But when Christmas eve, we were making a Christmas tree.
I worte my letters and put it in my socks, and hung it on a tree.
Then next morning, I could see my gift. But I couldn\'t believe Santa because I didn\'t see him.
As I grow up, we usually went to the amusement park oy trip instead of gift.
And I was better than gift. It is because I couldn\'t remember what is my gift, but I could rememver where I went until now.
So I don\'t believe Santa Claus even now, but Christmas was alwasy a never to be forgotten day.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for sharing your Christmas experience, [이름]! ^_^ I definitely agree that when it comes to Christmas \"gifts\", it\'s a lot better to spend time with our loved ones rather than to exchange material items with them~ The experience becomes even more special and memorable, right? ^^
~T.Harmony <3
>> CORRECT!
OR>> I never believed in Santa Claus.
Actually I didn\'t know exsist of Santa Claus.
>> In fact, I didn\'t know about the existence of Santa Claus.
>> In fact, I didn\'t know about the existence of Santa Claus.
I just saw in a book like so I know him of the fantasy.
>> I just saw him in a book, which is why I figured that he was a fictional character.
>> I just saw him in a book, which is why I figured that he was a fictional character.
And my father didn\'t disguise as Santa.
>> CORRECT!
But when Christmas eve, we were making a Christmas tree.
>> However, whenever Christmas Eve arrived, we would decorate our Christmas tree.
I worte my letters and put it in my socks, and hung it on a tree.
>> I wrote letters and placed it inside a Christmas stocking. Then, I would hang it on the tree.
>> I wrote letters and placed it inside a Christmas stocking. Then, I would hang it on the tree.
Then next morning, I could see my gift.
>> I would see my gift in the morning after.
But I couldn\'t believe Santa because I didn\'t see him.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
OR>> However, I didn\'t believe in Santa because I never saw him.
As I grow up, we usually went to the amusement park oy trip instead of gift.
>> Growing up, we would usually go to the amusement park or go on road trips instead of giving gifts.
>> Growing up, we would usually go to the amusement park or go on road trips instead of giving gifts.
And I was better than gift.
>> It was better than a gift.
It is because I couldn\'t remember what is my gift, but I could rememver where I went until now.
>> It is because I can\'t seem to remember the gifts I received over time, but when I go somewhere, I can easily remember the memories.
>> It is because I can\'t seem to remember the gifts I received over time, but when I go somewhere, I can easily remember the memories.
So I don\'t believe Santa Claus even now, but Christmas was alwasy a never to be forgotten day.
>> In conclusion, I still don\'t believe in Santa Claus, but one thing is for sure, Christmas will always be a special day to remember.
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