Did you consider learning another language because of your company?

2020-08-21 · 첨삭 강사 Jasper

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Dear [Name]. Long time no see for your homework. I forget it because of my business schedule. When I was high school, I learned Germany language. I have to choice another language there. It need for entering University. Germany is easy for me to learn. My score of Test was 100 %. But I can not speak Germany language. My teacher only gave a method to solve it.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Yes, it\'s been a long time since you did your homework but that\'s okay. Don\'t worry about it. Thank you for doing it. Keep it up. 

Here are your corrections:

Dear [Name].

Long time no see for your homework.
>> It\'s been a long time since I did your homework.

I forget it because of my business schedule.
>> I forget about it because of my schedule.

When I was high school, I learned Germany language.
>> When I was in high school, I learned the German language.

I have to choice another language there.
>> I have to choose another language there.

It need for entering University.
>> It is needed to enter the University.

Germany is easy for me to learn.
>> German language was easy for me to learn.

My score of Test was 100 %.
>> My score on the test was 100%
OR
>> My score on the test was perfect.

But I can not speak Germany language.
>> But I can not speak the German language.

My teacher only gave a method to solve it.
>> My teacher only gave us a method to solve it.

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