Did you enjoy festivals better when you were still younger or do you enjoy them more now that you ar
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I think I enjoyed festivals more when I was still younger.
When I was a little kid, a lot of festivals were very interested because I\'ve never seen it.
But now, I don\'t interested in a lot of festivals.
There are so many people and I don\'t like it.
So I think I enjoyed festivals more when I was still younger.
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Hi [이름]! ^^
Festivals are really great. People gather together to celebrate and have a good time. Hopefully, this virus would be gone so that we can go back to enjoying it again.
I think I enjoyed festivals more when I was still younger.
>> CORRECT
When I was a little kid, a lot of festivals were very interested because I\'ve never seen it.
>> When I was a little kid, a lot of festivals were very interesting but I wasn\'t able to see it.
But now, I don\'t interested in a lot of festivals.
>> But now, I\'m not interested in festivals anymore.
There are so many people and I don\'t like it.
>> CORRECT
So I think I enjoyed festivals more when I was still younger.
>>CORRECT
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