Did you enjoy your childhood?
학생이 쓴 원문
I guess I didn\'t enjoy my childhood.
My parents often argued and my father was drinker.
He always drunk and yelled to my siblings.
When I was youg I was not happy.I didn\'t have good memory
But my mom really loved us ,thanks to her our siblings grew up fine.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]! It must have been hard to go through that, especially with the arguments and the challenges at home. But it sounds like your mom\'s love and care made a huge difference in your life and helped you and your siblings get through it. It\'s brave of you to share this, and I hope you\'re finding peace and strength as you move forward.
-T. Sonny
I guess I didn\'t enjoy my childhood.>>Correct!
My parents often argued and my father was drinker.
>>My parents often argued, and my father was a heavy drinker.
He always drunk and yelled to my siblings.
He always drunk and yelled to my siblings.
>>He was always drunk and yelled at my siblings.
When I was youg I was not happy.
When I was youg I was not happy.
>>When I was young, I wasn\'t happy.
I didn\'t have good memory
>>I don’t have many good memories from that time.
But my mom really loved us ,thanks to her our siblings grew up fine.
But my mom really loved us ,thanks to her our siblings grew up fine.
>>But my mom really loved us, and thanks to her, my siblings and I grew up well.
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