Did you ever fall through the ice?
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Of course, I liked skiing in winter when more young. I don't scare to play everything. So when i first learned. I played beginning two times. and I Iwent to intermediate level right now. Natually,I many times falled at that time. But, It was so fun. I have many times memories. If you have time , pleasw you come korea . let's go skiing together.
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Hello Lisa,
Thank you for answering your homework.
~~ Teacher Kathy
Of course, I liked skiing in winter when more young.
>> I really liked skiing when I was young.
I don\'t scare to play everything.
>> I\'m not scared to try anything.
So when i first learned. I played beginning two times. and I Iwent to intermediate level right now.
>> So I decided to learn how to ski. I competed twice and now now my level is intermediate
Natually,I many times falled at that time.
>> I, of course, fell many time.
But, It was so fun.
>> But it was fun.
I have many times memories.
>> I had so much fun memories.
If you have time , pleasw you come korea . let\'s go skiing together.
>> And if you can, please visit Korea so we can go skiing together.
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