Did you ever win or lose in contest ?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, last month i had contest in our city. our team were piaying the cello,viola, violin. our team are string orchestra. There were sport dance, jazz dance,traditional music,traditional dance......our team was third. Hi kathy! i'm happy to see you again.
i tried to study after went to the trip to newzealand and austrailia. But delay delay........ ^^ i usually procrastinate. i definitely easier said than done. No matter how much motivation i have.
강사 첨삭
Hello Lisa,
Thank you for sending your homework.
~~ Teacher Kathy
Yes, last month i had contest in our city.
>> Last month, there was a contest in our city.
our team were piaying the cello,viola, violin. our team are string orchestra.
>> Our team played the cello, viola and violin. We played the string orchestra.
There were sport dance, jazz dance,traditional music,traditional dance......our team was third.
>> There were sport dance, jazz dance, and traditional dance competition. Our team ranked third/got the third place
Hi kathy! i\'m happy to see you again.
>> Hi Kathy, I\'m happy to see you again.
i tried to study after went to the trip to newzealand and austrailia.
>> I tried to study again after going on a trip to New Zealand and Australia.
But delay delay........ ^^ i usually procrastinate. i definitely easier said than done. No matter how much motivation i have.
>> I usually delay things no matter how motivated I am. It\'s definitely easier said than done.
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