Did you get rid of unnecessary objects and kept only what are essential in your home this pandemic?

2020-09-15 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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I usually don’t get rid of seemingly unnecessary objects in my room. Maybe the reason for this is the same with many others. Though they are too tear and wear to use again, there are some memories related to my special days and want to keep my reminisnes, or I think right before throwing them away like that I would really need them at a certain point.  Nonetheless, I think that I am a bit a minimalist. I’m curious why people call someone, who easily removes one’s items, as a minimalist. If you haven’t got a lot of things, you wouldn’t need to waste theirs.  Nowadays, I am trying not to buy something more, as I’ve got a similar one. This year, I realized that I’ve already got enough clothes to wear matching all kinds of seasons and situations, so I bought a shirt and a few pairs of socks for a year.  On the other hand, I have to lose my interest in electronics, countless new released products are always tempting me.

강사 첨삭

Thank you [이름]!
~Lucy

I usually don’t get rid of seemingly unnecessary objects in my room. 
>>CORRECT!
Maybe the reason for this is the same with many others. 
>>CORRECT!
Though they are too tear and wear to use again, there are some memories related to my special days and want to keep my reminisnes, or I think right before throwing them away like that I would really need them at a certain point. 
>>CORRECT!
Nonetheless, I think that I am a bit a minimalist.
>>Nonetheless, I think that I am a bit minimalist.
I’m curious why people call someone, who easily removes one’s items, as a minimalist.
>>CORRECT!
 If you haven’t got a lot of things, you wouldn’t need to waste theirs. 
>>CORRECT!
Nowadays, I am trying not to buy something more, as I’ve got a similar one. 
>>CORRECT!
This year, I realized that I’ve already got enough clothes to wear matching all kinds of seasons and situations, so I bought a shirt and a few pairs of socks for a year. 
>>CORRECT!
On the other hand, I have to lose my interest in electronics, countless new released products are always tempting me.
>>CORRECT!

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